All Comments on 'Temptation'

your poem has been reviewed as one of today's new poems at Lit. you can read what I've said here:

http://forum.literotica.com/showpost.php?p=32516444&postcount=2883

it might not be the best piece in the world but it was worth a mention. some weren't. my opinions only and no reflection on what any other poet thinks on the forums. :)