All Comments on 'The Dark Collection'

by RiverMaya

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29wordsforsnow29wordsforsnowover 3 years ago

Like a box of chocolates with each small candy wrapped in paper glimmering golden.

What an exaggeration you think? But as you enfold the delicate foil you're astonished about the virtuoso hand-crafted little dessert that starts a wild stream in your oral desert.

You lock the doors, shut the blinds and sit down with a candle to enjoy the little gems unaware of the world still turning. You listen to your tongue, feel the definition of bitterness and sweetness, every bite, every melting drop, every new, undefined aroma leaves you hungry for more and repleted with emotions you're happily smiling about all the tears you were able to well and that came so easily.

Thanks for this appetizing selection. My personal favorite are the stars that shine so bright.

Lexiloo571Lexiloo571over 3 years ago

Speaks to my heart and soul

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July 15, 2023 My poem is in the latest issue of Spirit Fire Review: https://www.spiritfirereview.com/post/new-issue-of-spirit-fire-review-1