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them same purpose.

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I hear music to this, that may or may not be a problem, it would be a great song. There are things which gravititate to cliche', great for songs, not for great poetry. I love these lines:

box up these memories,

or cremate them?

U-Haul is at least fifty dollars,

boxes of matches are free.

These are good, but end it, great poetry is open ended, ends with a question.

I like it, I'm just trying to offer a consideration for your future writing.