All Comments on 'The Ocean in Motion'

Good job keeping up with the poetry, you have been doing well, it seems, with all your literature. So I hope you keep on keeping on with all your poems. If I were to make a critique, I would have to say that you might want to make each phrase

a little longer. However that is more based on my taste and such opinions that anything truly necessary. I would definitely say with the way it is structured and flows that it has a very powerful impact.So please keep making literature for you inspire me to keep making more. So without a further ado, Thank You.

Thank you for your comment. I will be uploading another poem shortly, but I have first have to edit it. Your comment made my day :)

A touching tribute to your lover and beautiful reflection on your loss.

Emotionally rich and powerful.

What a beautiful work. It conveys so many feelings both of the author and what it sparks within the reader. You are very talented and I can't wait to read more of your works.