All Comments on 'the porch'

sensual, erotic, seductive....

it's all there

perfect word choice and placement

it doesn't get any better than this

so much like haiku, for me anyway

perhaps my favorite poem you've ever written

thank you

AND a garden??? damn, you must be my soul mate ;)

but seriously, very few words, you extend an invitation to so many...i can smell the mint almost

This reads like a note on a card I wish was sent to me.

Thank you for sharing!

n'sweet. Very nice.

Nice work... short, but what a great impact :)