All Comments on 'the porch'

Nice work... short, but what a great impact :)

n'sweet. Very nice.

This reads like a note on a card I wish was sent to me.

Thank you for sharing!

AND a garden??? damn, you must be my soul mate ;)

but seriously, very few words, you extend an invitation to so many...i can smell the mint almost

sensual, erotic, seductive....

it's all there

perfect word choice and placement

it doesn't get any better than this

so much like haiku, for me anyway

perhaps my favorite poem you've ever written

thank you