All Comments on 'The Stalking Moon'

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MigbirdMigbirdabout 2 months ago

Could feel the defiance; loved last line.

JustplainjeffJustplainjeffabout 2 months ago

This is from Deb: Fantastic offering Cagivagurl, you're depth is amazing. Jeff might not tell you, but he likes this, too. 5 huge stars.

ShelbyDawn57ShelbyDawn57about 2 months ago

First of your poetry I've read. Good stuff.

paulsubpaulsubabout 2 months ago

A well done poem of standing up against threats of society and finding the courage to be yourself.

FandeborisFandeborisabout 2 months ago

A kindred spirit I see awaits.

She howls her defiance unable to bend

Gives the Gates of Hell a curse.

Never relenting. Ever no end.

No Peace for her, but her life she keeps.

A blaze of thought turned into a prayer.

Defiance blazes within her then she weeps.

She is iron and will always be there.

I am humbled.

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