All Comments on 'The Twelve Days Of Litmas'

Was sober and still LMAO thank you. See

Oh My, My. Words fail me.

Not all that poetic, BUT it was creative and funny... :-) So a five

Choice!

I had never read any poems by any authors, but now I will try your other three. This one is outstanding. I am still chuckling.

I did a spit take right on my monitor screen ! That 'Lil Ditty is gonna be stuck in my head for a long time !

Git a TAZER and shoot your self. But firzt tell me what the FUC all those letters mean.

10 not for TAZZ though.

bill...

transpose and juxtapose and put it into fold. TK U MLJ LV NV

i cannot believe this only has 735 views as of this date.

(cough , blush) well maybe i can,,,,

i have read every story by the Author , and yet i never looked at the poetry before ... (shame on me)

this had me laughing and smiling & it's really very funny , idk how original it is ,

i for one have never seen anything similar before .. so i give a big salut to the Author.

has to be some way to get this poem/song more widely viewed & talked about.

those members rating this 5 stars ... please go one step further & add the song/poem to your Favorites ..

Twelve Days Of Litmas , will not fail to cheer up anyone who reads it..

xxxhugsxxx

made me smile

I liked the variations on your wife...Maybe you can pass on some of those STD's to her for Christmas...

glad only twelve days

nice modulation and end

5

I think you hit all the categories here at Lit with a particular shout out to LW.

Merry Christmas to you and your naughty elves.

Very nice structure - the variations on the 'and a' combined with each particular day's offering lift the poem and make it both very good and very funny. 5*