All Comments on 'The Wall'

wonderful write, emotions unfolding and curved by the pen. I enjoy your literary creations, thanks...Art~

Yep I have walls,

I can't see them but

I know they are there and

I hope one day I can knock

them down, but not yet ~

Lovely poem RhymeFairy

you have the ability in

your writing to make me

stop and look inside myself,

to find my demons and try to

fight them.

Thank you.

~ J

The Emperors new wall. Very nicely wrote.

BD

The wall..the self contained prison...Took me a very long time to realise that no one could knock down the wall or open the gate...

One day...one very bad day...I pounded the walls with my fists...and screamed "enough enough" spit the key out of my gut and set myself free.

It has taken me far too long to discover your writing I think I'll linger here a bit