The Wheel

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They call it "The Rat Race" for a reason.
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Djmac1031
Djmac1031
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At the dawn of each new day we face it.

The Wheel.

The Wheel serves no purpose.
It takes us nowhere.

And yet we're trained,
Obliged,
Obligated,
To get on,
Get running,
And start the damned spinning.

The cycle begins anew.

On we go,
Each time hoping we arrive at a new destination,
With desire and determination
And the promise,
The empty promise,
That this time,
Certainly this time,
We'll actually get somewhere.

Only to look around
As The Wheel winds down
And find ourselves right where we started.

Still in The Cage.

Yet each new day
The Wheel calls to us,
Shiny and sparkly,
And oh, so attractive.

Beckoning us to once again climb aboard,
To wear our weary feet to the bone on its cold steel rails.

The endless squeak of the fucking thing
Echoing in our ears,
Drowning out our thoughts.
Drowning out our dreams.
Deafening us to the world around us.

The world outside The Cage.

Until we forget it exists.

Until nothing else matters.
Nothing but The Cage
And The Wheel that keeps us running in endless circles.

The perpetual, spinning Wheel.

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AUTHORS AFTERWARDS

I'm no poet.

So I'm sure I've probably broken every rule to poetry there is with this.

I don't really care.

Sometimes rules were made to be broken.

Djmac1031
Djmac1031
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EmilyMillerEmilyMiller9 months ago

You certainly are a poet, hun. Relatable and beautifully written. Em

lexlogan8lexlogan89 months ago

Certainly acceptable as poetry. Unfortunately you did not tag the work as "depressing, downbeat." Having coped with depression much of my life, I would prefer not to have read this.

ArkingArking9 months ago

well done, in my mind there are no rules for a poet to embrace. You write what is in your heart, what is on your mind. If it means something to you, that is all there is.

I love poetry, both new and old, if it moves me [like the wheel does] pardon the pun, then you have achieved a goal that all of us poets strive for.

cmj711cmj7119 months ago

Keep coloring outside the lines!

Well done, now get back to work. 😊

SmuttyandfunSmuttyandfun9 months ago

5 Stars! And a favorite, too!

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