All Comments on 'This is only a test poem (not real)'

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29wordsforsnow29wordsforsnowalmost 2 years ago

"This, my friend, was just a test,"

a soul was told when laid to rest

in some holy ground near Bucharest

"Please tell me, what did you like best?"

It took a day to think, but at last, the soul confessed

'It wasn't when I was pretty dressed,

or felt a shiny knight on quest.

It was the fatal night I had a guest.

She knocked and told she traveled west

right down the river to join a poets fest'

after dinner and some, tucked tightly in her nest

the lines she whispered from the depths of her chest

in rhymes and meter perfect, the story full of zest,

that, my Lord, that was my life's very best.'

Seeing the mighty eyebrow raised to its crest,

the soul starts fading, leaving its last manifest,

'Sire, excuse me please, I'm already fully blessed.'

Winter_FareWinter_Farealmost 2 years ago

Manu dost thou jest?

You have spawned a masterpiece

Real as all the rest

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

There once was a boy named Manu

Who having little to do

Created a test post

More popular than most

Sacré bleu Manu the ingenue

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