All Comments on 'Together at Last'

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lorencinolorencinoalmost 15 years ago
A bull's eye

<br>. . . touches my cunt<br>

Shell pink, wet and wanting<br>

. . . <br>

As I shiver into a moment of heaven<br>

Sliding down ladders<br>

And at the bottom let it go . . .<br><br>

Highly successful imagery which captures the essence of the beauty and the ecstasy you are writing about. You are both hot and talented.<br>

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