All Comments on 'Trip to the Boston Museum of Art'

I started and I found my ass on the bus with you. I

loved the same two bricks and sucked a smoke with

Charlie. I hated to go home. I'm not sure what kind of

poem this is, but I could dance to it and in my book thats

good poetry. Cool fieldtrip.

Very well captures the stream-of-consiousness childhood experience of the field trip, from wonder to boredom to trepidation. Now write a 500 word essay about the use of color in poetry and turn it by Monday.

my friend your poem has benn mentioned in my reviews

; )

As there is so much to observe and talk about! I personally did not respond to the excessive use of "&", I'm sure it was purposeful but lead to overkill after 25 lines or so.

& you gotballs

& talent

& know how to cache an eye

& that's what's about

& its full of nice little insites

& subtle little twists

It takes soem real talejnt to pull it off. But you did more than just make me accept it, you took me on a trip with you. Bravo.