All Comments on 'Trip to the Boston Museum of Art'

It takes soem real talejnt to pull it off. But you did more than just make me accept it, you took me on a trip with you. Bravo.

& you gotballs

& talent

& know how to cache an eye

& that's what's about

& its full of nice little insites

& subtle little twists

As there is so much to observe and talk about! I personally did not respond to the excessive use of "&", I'm sure it was purposeful but lead to overkill after 25 lines or so.

my friend your poem has benn mentioned in my reviews

; )

Very well captures the stream-of-consiousness childhood experience of the field trip, from wonder to boredom to trepidation. Now write a 500 word essay about the use of color in poetry and turn it by Monday.

I started and I found my ass on the bus with you. I

loved the same two bricks and sucked a smoke with

Charlie. I hated to go home. I'm not sure what kind of

poem this is, but I could dance to it and in my book thats

good poetry. Cool fieldtrip.