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My Erotic TrailMy Erotic Trailabout 18 years ago
nice write

I enjoyed your poem~

AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
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transition is always the most difficult stage...you captured the transition between wakefullness and dreams very nicely...

~annaswirls

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