All Comments on 'Untrue'

another generic form about the loneliness of becoming a modern, confident woman. Your language was interesting enough that I read the entire thing, usually I don't make it very far in plain poems. See, the problem with writing a poem is the part where you put something wholly you in, personal, some detail that couldn't fit anybody who's ever been in a relationship with another adult human. I hate the double spacing, some words are superfluous, but overall good effort and try to put something in that you think represents you and not most of the adult population.