- Erotic Poetry
- Unwinding in the Dark
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soft promises glow
for two silhouettes
unwinding in the dark
heat flitting in nerves
the touches are precious
craved and savoured
caressing soft faces
with whispered names
in heavy breaths
voices brought low
a faint separation
of lips, of hips, of needs
a slow flowing desire
while pressed together
changing in pace
sensation soaring
a swirl of want
purest sweet chaos
and joy is that final
release
and joy is that final
purest sweet chaos
a swirl of want
sensation soaring
changing in pace
while pressed together
a slow flowing desire
of lips, of hips, of needs
a faint separation
voices brought low
in heavy breaths
with whispered names
caressing soft faces
craved and savoured
the touches are precious
heat flitting in nerves
unwinding in the dark
for two silhouettes
soft promises glow
- COMMENTS
Enchantment_of_Nyxalmost 4 years agoI don't think I've ever seen that done before at that length. It must have taken some mental gymnastics to work the lines out both ways as you wrote it. Even though the meter stayed the same, it actually "felt" like a rise and then a decline to me. (Or maybe I"m just easily influenced by the title, which was perfect.)
Levitating_Bedalmost 4 years agoI have no idea, but these two might have. Well played but even more importantly: well done! Perfect palindromic pleasure.
29wordsforsnowalmost 4 years agoThanks for sharing.
I do like that the verses also work pretty well with lines in reversed order.
A few nice little twists could provide an alternative to accompany this poem, like a reflection in a crazy mirror:
and final is that joy
a chaos swirl
of purest sweet want
