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CleardaynowCleardaynowabout 10 years ago
Really fun

Subtle and clever thinking. Fun

GuiltyPleasureGuiltyPleasureabout 10 years ago
Brave New World?

Clever, the simplicity masks how well constructed this poem is. Some juicy alliteration and tasty line breaks. Recommended.

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