All Comments on 'Vanity's Death'

very metaphoric. This poem communicates a lot with its images, which I think makes for really good poetry. I kind of don't like the phrase "drops her drawers" because the rest of the poem makes its point in a less direct way, so the phrase is distracting. I think it would be a smoother read without it. Otherwise I think it's really good--should be submitted to a poetry journal. Just my opinion. :)

Angeline

A little truth here ~

The older and plainer she gets

The more ostentatious her vanity;

Equilibrium maintained.

Alicia told me that it is a pece of furniture name & a personsality too. That makesit all the more better!!!

Its not ZEN, but it's VERY good!

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