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All Comments on 'Wait, what did I name this poem?'
by Oldbear63
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Ashesh9over 9 years agoOldfriend : all Humankind is stoically awaitin' their Inevitable Ultimate Fate :
Alzheimers ' if they live long enough .
HoneyAdoredover 9 years agoMore rhyming OldBear?
I applaud your whimsical approach to this dilemma
Made me both smile and sigh at the same time
Loved it
todski28over 9 years agothe way the metre stumbles
could be cleaned up, and yet it plays with the title and theme that even though it jars a little, it helps to highlight the situation. 5ed
JWrenover 9 years agoI wanted to say ...
... something pertinent: now what was it? Ah yes, a light, welcome approach to a dark place and subject. Thanks.
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