All Comments on 'Waiting'

I LIKE THIS A LOT!! tIME & EVERY THING STANDING STIHL WHEN YOU WAIT FOR SOME THING TO HAPPENS!! very good!!!

While this poem starts out well and really has some creative expressions. It reads well, brings out emotions until the last line. This line does not hold up to the rest of the write....besides that it has strong potential

du lac~

I could just see the cobwebs.

Waiting has a way of putting a lot of things into prospective. We have all been there at some point..waiting~

The smile I did not see coming..

Romantic line and hope ya got what you were waiting for.. If not... well there is always tomorrow?? err right.. Hope ya get your wish~~!!

from that special someone is definitely worth waiting for.

I instantly saw a latter day Miss Havisham in your poem. A very evocative poem!

b'brig