Try the free LITEROTICA WEBCAMS!

All Comments on 'Wake Me'

by Nofu

Sort by:
Newest FirstOldest First
  • 3 Comments
AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
so trite

with enough snatches of songs it needs a musical score

NofuNofualmost 7 years agoAuthor
Thank you for the feedback

This poem was never meant to be a song, nor was it based on a song. However, if someone has a talent for putting the music to my poem/lyrics I'd love to hear it! ;)

tazz317tazz317almost 7 years ago
WAKE ME,,,,ESPECIALLY IF YOU TAKE ME

up and down,,,,around the town.....for whom we cuddled as one, TK U MLJ LV NV

Anonymous
Our Comments Policy is available in the Lit FAQ
Login
Post as:
Anonymous
Login