All Comments on 'walking across the white'

You just HAD to write this, didn't you;

Now I've got to head on out into this cold

And I'm cold before I get there!!

i like the sound of this:

'the first step slides

I realize

to be ice wise'

but this has me thinking:

'the body draws up

like a curled up kitten'

i'm thinking that a kitten draws it's body up after it gets up from being curled up. maybe, 'like a once curled up kitten' or something similar?

"embark on a short dart" I'm iffy about short dart.

I'd lose the curled up kitten.

Other than that, some good lines in this one.