All Comments on 'War Diaries Day Three'

I hope the others pass fast...<p>

I like this. There are some facinating images here that envoke a sense of bewilderment and a shade of panic. Excellent. Thank you

i mentioned this submission in the New Poem Review thread in the Poetry Forum. please feel free to come along and join in with other poets. the 50% temp rating here is so that it does not affect other temp ratings that follow. - wildsweetone