All Comments on 'We Stand Together - Earth Day'

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I am addicted to your story, and it seems also to your poetry. It was a refreshing change to read "We Stand Together". Your use of imagery was fantastic, and I like how you continually came back to their features, empahsising their differences and then ultimatly using those differences to make the offspring's features. I think it added an element of realism to the poem. All in all I loved your poem, and I would love to read more of your work whenever you get a chance to post it. Thank you for an enjoyable poem!

Thank you for the comment, I feel so proud of this poem as it is my first real try. You seem to have been writing poetry longer than I have and I love your work! Thank you leading me to believe mine is good enough and I hope you enjoy my next submission; a poem called Dreaming. Let me know what you think.