All Comments on 'What Are The Odds?'

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LeBrozLeBrozover 17 years ago
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A haunting piece of the pain of being ignored/denied. There are a few spots where it could use some tweaking, mostly adding or deleting a word or two to improve on the word flow; otherwise, pretty good.

AmyfriendAmyfriendover 17 years ago
What are the odds really..

That someone will listen today with an open mind... and with genuine empathy.

duddle146duddle146over 17 years ago
empathy

She could complain ~ but who would listen.

My Erotic TrailMy Erotic Trailover 17 years ago
odds

interesting poem, thanks for the read

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