All Comments on 'What Are The Odds?'

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My Erotic TrailMy Erotic Trailover 17 years ago
odds

interesting poem, thanks for the read

duddle146duddle146over 17 years ago
empathy

She could complain ~ but who would listen.

AmyfriendAmyfriendover 17 years ago
What are the odds really..

That someone will listen today with an open mind... and with genuine empathy.

LeBrozLeBrozover 17 years ago
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A haunting piece of the pain of being ignored/denied. There are a few spots where it could use some tweaking, mostly adding or deleting a word or two to improve on the word flow; otherwise, pretty good.

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