All Comments on 'What She Has To Give'

a great portrayal of that incredibly fine line. loved this poem. i love the way the read speeds up. i like your line end words - each is important and meaningful, including 'it'. excellent.

critique - i stumbled in the 'yield' line as i misread. (i'm still learning how to read poetry without the same punctuation i expect when i read prose).

absolutely perfect... violetflower

I love the desperate tone of this poem and the rueful realization of the last line.

Awesome!

This sounds like it would make great lyrics to a song! I love it!