All Comments on 'Where Two Hearts Meet - Part Three'

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CaligrlCaligrlalmost 13 years ago
Loved the honesty...

This is beautifully written. I loved how you conveyed the needs and expectations of the two hearts!

Loved all of it, but my absolute favorite lines:

When the mind is open and

the heart is assenting

the soul can exist in peace

5+

Scotsman69Scotsman69almost 13 years ago
Your words

convey your feelings. Thank you for sharing them. Can be difficult sometimes. One thing is certain in this world: if you don't at least try to reach another, you will never touch anyone. You are reaching. You'll find something, maybe someone, that way. Something is always better than nothing.

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Now as old as the hills and just as dusty. Thought I had love was wrong. Found love and family. Everything from before prepared me for now. Be safe, Be well, Be kind, Be at peace, Be in hope. The best is yet to come.

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