White Lightning

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the moment of release
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I feel you come up behind me while I look out side the window.
 Your arms around my waist, your lips hot upon my nape.
my legs buckle a little at the first contact of flesh to flesh.
Your kiss moves around my neck now and suddenly I am facing you.
Eye to eye, forehead to forehead
Hips pressed hard together
You kiss my mouth with dizzying greed,
your hands on either side of my head, holding me steady.
My legs buckle again,
lightning thru my soul,
arcing thru my flesh.
You lead me away from the window
and into the next room.
My heart pounds, my body throbs.
I absolutely ache for you.
Exquisite ache.
You lay on top of me and
I am breathless with desire.
Your skin on mine is like fire to fire
We both begin to burn and
our movements become faster,
our kisses more heated
Our touches more brazen.
Your fingers leave trails of
gently throbbing fire upon my skin.
The unnecessary clothes come off.
And just before,
Just before,
you gaze down at me.
I meet your eyes and I am lost.
I am melted into the bedspread, and I am held
captive by your eyes
even as my body is held willing
captive by yours.
You bring your lips to mine slowly
As our bodies meld together.
Face to face,
Heart to heart,
Hip to hip.
This time I am gone, far away
Sent spinning into the air and away from everything but
the sight sound scent feel of you.
I grasp your shoulders
I scratch your back.
You pin my hands above my head
with yours.
We are the only two souls in the universe right now.
its only us and the magic
the friction
the lightning.
This bed is our kingdom
This moment our salvation.
Sweet surrender and exquisite ache
building with such pressure
moving faster now and gaining momentum
surrender is required now and I
give myself over to it.
I will the release to come, and it does
with gasping
clutching clenching expansion
universes of light inside my head
explosions in my body;
white lightning between our
salt-stained skin
and anywhere that we
touch.
After,
when its over,
and I lay with my head on your chest,
I feel aftershocks of lightning
and I press my legs together and smile

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
No absence of cliches, too much "lightning", and it runs too long

but it is a heartfelt emotion expression. Outside is one word, "White lightning" is home brewed hooch (alcohol)--try not to repeat the same word unless needed to express a point; keep at it and you too will be a great poet.

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