All Comments on 'Who Anger Does'

by average gina

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tungtied2utungtied2uover 19 years ago
Between the 2 of us....

we have 5 personalities running around here (see my poem- [URL=http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=159169]Beside Myself[/URL]. Ya know what that means? More potential votes! Thanks av gin.

*hey- have any of you seen the therm?

BooMerengueBooMerengueover 19 years ago
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Laughin at Tung! This is very clever, Gina! Thanks.

eclipsedgirleclipsedgirlover 19 years ago
interesting thought

hrmmm ...

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
Outstanding!

Perfect.. One does not have to strain, but just enjoy the ride. Each line leads you into the next incrementally without overload, and still makes a complex statement about what the author is experiencing.

Great work!!

A.M.

WickedEveWickedEveover 19 years ago
:)

Very nice closing lines!

FloaterFloaterover 19 years ago
Gorgeous

The ballerina of wry delights does it again!

So sharp, so sweet and so much fun.

Minnie(virgin)Minnie(virgin)over 19 years ago
Agree

Very good. If only we could get rid of our anger we would all sleep better and act more pleasant among others.

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
Great antidote

Most independant way of putting anger, most therapeutic to remember how anger tears at your soul, and weakens n'separates one!

My sis's a poet

wouldn't you know it!!

Love Ebby from OM

AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
big bones comment

So very true...anger does make us all different people...and we'd sleep better. The poem itself is great .EAch line leads into the next very efficiently. Good job gina

sophia janesophia janeabout 19 years ago
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I especially like the last three lines. Great piece!

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