by average gina
we have 5 personalities running around here (see my poem- [URL=http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=159169]Beside Myself[/URL]. Ya know what that means? More potential votes! Thanks av gin.
*hey- have any of you seen the therm?
Perfect.. One does not have to strain, but just enjoy the ride. Each line leads you into the next incrementally without overload, and still makes a complex statement about what the author is experiencing.
Great work!!
A.M.
The ballerina of wry delights does it again!
So sharp, so sweet and so much fun.
Very good. If only we could get rid of our anger we would all sleep better and act more pleasant among others.
Most independant way of putting anger, most therapeutic to remember how anger tears at your soul, and weakens n'separates one!
My sis's a poet
wouldn't you know it!!
Love Ebby from OM
So very true...anger does make us all different people...and we'd sleep better. The poem itself is great .EAch line leads into the next very efficiently. Good job gina