All Comments on 'Will You'

can't tell if the You shifts, or where

i 5ed, with the note, this will get You into trouble

but no need for the Capitals...

I'm wondering about the capitalization as well. Generally, apart from the Bible, You is not capitalized mid sentence. If the intent is to give a prayer-like tone to the poem, then it works. It's also possible the intent goes deeper than that, not sure.

change the question to Can You. TK U MLJ LV NV

Thank you for viewing and your comments. This was written for someone that uses the Y/i format. I will remember to change the format for others to read in the future.

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