All Comments on 'Wishful Thinking'

by 29wordsforsnow

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RiverMayaRiverMayaover 3 years ago
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Deepest pain and unbearable beauty in one piece. This is so profound, sir, and my favorite of your elegant offerings.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

My eyes filled with tears as I read this. It is unbelievably beautiful, what you've written here. Thank you.

MyaFeelsMyaFeelsover 3 years ago

Every day, the simple acts we do are smothered by the thoughts of the one we held in the most highest of regard.

As we doan our socks, we start another day without the possibility of ending it alongside them.

I want to know your Rose.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

Absolutely loved this. My heart hurt reading it. You are so wonderfully romantic and write so beautiful it makes my heart ache. To be in your company. X

29wordsforsnow29wordsforsnowover 3 years agoAuthor

While it started with the more primal wish for being with the lioness, it soon felt that there must be some more, a reason, something out of reach. Digging some more I found the feeling of 'You appreciate what you had when it's lost.'

So as I understand, most romantic would be to appreciate what you love when you have it.

Thank you all for your wonderful comments, I really appreciate your words, and works too. How should we know about love if no one told us. So please keep up the telling.

PiscatorPiscatorover 3 years ago

Sad and reflective. the repetition works and I liked your ending.

GiadaRosettaGiadaRosettaover 3 years ago
nice volta

This is a beautiful elegy. And hello, nice to meet you, at least through the comments.

WildIrishRosieWildIrishRosieover 3 years ago
oh

Oh, my dear.

that is lovely.

AlexBaileyAlexBaileyabout 3 years ago

A beautiful dirge. I've recently lost some dear friends, damn COVID kept the memorials to family only. I would have loved to pay my last respects in person.

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