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by KaeDoll

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mynameisbenmynameisbenover 12 years ago
Magnificent!

What an emotional roller coaster ride this poem is! I felt pain and fury, longing and regret. Passion and intensity screams from every line (especially from line two).

This is the type of poem that seeps into one's subconscious and takes root. I'll be thinking about this heartfelt introspection for days to come. Poetry that sings with such operatic passion inspires me to lift up my own pen and dare to bare my creative soul. But glancing back to the mastery I see before me, toiling beneath the glare of such brilliance, I know the best I could do by comparison would merely be words on a screen.

That's a 5-star "Bravo!," KaeDoll. Please write more.

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