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Esperanza_HidalgoEsperanza_Hidalgoalmost 14 years ago
Lovely

I really like this poem. Very nice word choice.

greenmountaineergreenmountaineeralmost 14 years ago

Poignant, concise. Loved the last stanza in particular. "Pendulum" made me think of the natural flow of the universe, contrasted adroitly with "the ticking and counting" of man-made contrivances whether it's work, structures, or war.

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