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twelveoonetwelveoonealmost 19 years ago
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bad pun here

"but one by one they all leave."

I would expect that of

me

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
when was

the last time you hugged a tree ....you pay a nice tribute to the symbiosis of life..luv your writes...be blessed/blue

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
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this has some great comparison to life, nice work as always.

Sabina

hippiedudehippiedudealmost 19 years ago
waxing philosophic

nice use of something so hugely literary it might easily fall into the mundane -- You however did not let it land there -- enjoyable read my friend

Jennifer CJennifer Calmost 19 years ago
great stuff

Love your ZMP poetry and this was no exception,

a really lovely interesting piece.

Thanx.

~ J

LuciousBi-Writes4ULuciousBi-Writes4Ualmost 19 years ago
Awesome Arty~

That's what I am going to call you from now on!

What symbolic comparisons i find within these lines!

nice one buddy!

Kisses,

T <Big Grin!!>

Scott N. LeavittScott N. Leavittalmost 19 years ago
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WOW!! Super ZMP!!! So good and nice I read it 4 times all ready!!! GREAT!!! ZMA

Bridget69Bridget69almost 19 years ago
Nice comparisons...

between leaves and the process of life and death among the human civilization and the uniqueness between individuals.

Wanton VixxxenWanton Vixxxenalmost 19 years ago
This one goes into My...

family album right in front, Art.<smile> All of your ZMP poetry is loved by Me, but this one stands out as THE one to remind Me that My family, like leaves, will all cling together on our family tree with new sprouts appearing at times and that each will be a slightly different type of leaf. You made Me cry good tears with this one, Art. Thank you. <kiss>

Vixxx

dcpoet44dcpoet44almost 19 years ago
yes.......

we are different.......but sometimes it seems like others want us all grouped together so they can be all to powerful. this was cool write......don

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