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and all this taming is hard stuff to control......*LOL*. this is my little spot of rest in the piece:

The Painted Pony calmed again

Thunder Hawk, letting this soak in.

He slowly approached the Horse

reached gently with his hand, rubbing.

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it has an ecstasy written all over it. nicely done...and the wit shines through.......don

Painted images that you set my mind off to race. For the beauty within all your writings. Images you can evoke from your readers by words you write so well.

You constantly allow my mind to travel through poetry.

Thank you, Art..

*Moi*

WOW!! An other great ZMP poem by ZEN master ART!

It is SO GOOD! The poney likes patting not bossing!!!

It is so ZEN!!! Like the bird squised by hand not losed to be free!!!

A GREAT ONE!!

know if you would believe me on this ...but last year I met a man named darius...who said I was marked by shoshone...and he was know as the one who rides swift ponies...wow...weird...huh.... he was writing a book at a website called iamdarius.com but ,, its gone now ...don't know what happened to him...great write...blue

Taking your time, to tame the mind.

Be gentle, yet firm. Hold on till the end,

for the ride is worth the fall. Eternity it seems.

Takes command. Of the shadow, who crosses the land.

Upon the Painted pony, he rides~

Very nice, smooth lil ride Art...

I loved it~!!!!!!

Sweet pictures of long stretches of land.

Pony, and man... Sweet sweet ride I tell ya~!!

"I wish to understand my mind!"

Don't we all! Lol.

I love your ZMP poetry Art

and this one was a fabulous read,

lovely visuals and as always

masterfully written.

Loved it!

Thanks.

~ J

you just BLEW My mind away with your ZMP visuals, Art! You never lack for beautiful ideas for a zen poem, do you? And we're so lucky you don't!!! Thank you for putting a big smile on My face tonight, mi amigo! <still smiling>

Vixxx

Art once again a wonderful read... peaceful and edgy all at once.. a lesson poem. Shoshone! lol... nice job

du~