by Iwroteathing
A great story and well worth the wait, we all need patience. A delightful historic setting illustrates so well that debauchery has been with us for centuries, and the depraved chronicles of the vicountess as she slides deeper into humiliation at her own hand is wonderful.
I look forward to more stories soon.
You have gone all in with fancy words here, huh?
Well, I'm not an expert on historical inflation, so I don't know if 19 shillings is a lot. It doesn't sound like a lot. In any case if a client wants to pay more, why not? They go there to feel free, no?
You have managed to find a way to do public sex without damaging the girl's reputation. Well done. Of course rich people don't give a fuck about the rumors spreading among the poor. Separate worlds.
Very good the story. No baldness or bodymod today (except for the pregnancy). Thank you for sharing it. As always, waiting for your next one.
-Onkana
One of your best stories. I liked the gradual degradation. (ANd it could even have gone slower) I also like your cherry bomb and empress body double.
Loved the story but the ending seems rushed…. All in all I would love to see a sequel
Great story! While the Viscountess’ story is pretty self-contained, it does make the reader want a sequel. With connections and an interest in social experimentation and class change, she would be a good facilitator for women that wanted to switch class (in either direction). Maybe a sister, friend or cousin who desired a permanent change. A life swap like the prince and the pauper would mean the protagonist wouldn’t be initially missed, and would gradually close the door on a return as time passed. Even some of the same beats from the first story would hit differently: like the sequel protagonist watching the Viscountess leave Tallboy’s establishment and knowing she can’t retreat in the same manner, or getting evaluated highly by Tallboy for good health and knowing she won’t eat as well in the future. Also the contrast with the upwardly mobile counterpart would be interesting, like watching the counterpart enjoy the security of marriage; or the new protagonist getting a permanent mark like a tattoo that would prevent a return to her original class.
Love the story. It’s too bad that you’ve been having so much trouble posting the How to. Have you thought about posting it somewhere else?
Posting my writers guide to a new platform would be pointless considering how dependent a writers guide is on an pre-established audience which I only have on Literotica. I will keep trying to get it over the line, but until then, if you really can't wait for it, get in contact using the contact page of my profile, make sure to include your email, and I'll email you a copy.
19 SHILLINGS is amazing I can't believe I'm saying this but this was the best out of the bunch and I love the Dixie's Downfall story's a lot of what this author made are really good, the bdsm content is what really gets my attention even tho this wasn't the main focus of the story the unexpected changes where the best very multi dimensional 10/10 ! Pleas continue to make more story's you are truly talented.
Has the writer given up on writing any further. There has been no new post since forever.
Aside from from the high level of creativity and your way with words . Your tales and chapters are nice and long . I especially appreciate that .