All Comments on '1969 - Ch. 02'

by SylviaG

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TatankaBillTatankaBillover 4 years ago
Fun!

This is so much fun to read. I'd have given you ten stars if I could. I'm eager for the next installment!

JBEdwardsJBEdwardsover 4 years ago
Tatanka Bill has it right!

This is a ten star installment of your story. Truly well done. I feel as if I'm right there, in the courtroom. Very powerful writing; I am in awe. Thank you, and congratulations, and like everyone else, I'm sure, I can't wait for Chapter 3! -- JB

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Great fun & suspense

... even if the legalese doesn't ring true (but I would not know any better, anyway).

Great drama and lots of unexpected twists and turns.

Thanks for the great time I had reading the first two chapters! Looking forward to more.

flick_46flick_46over 4 years ago
Very Clever

Feel like I'm right in that courtroom .Very well written. Congrats

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

I stopped reading the story. there was no sex in the story at all and it was boring. i give the story 2 stars

AnonymousAnonymous6 months ago

A lawyer's not a council. He's a counsel or a counsellor. And it's reporters, not reports. And several of the accusations are made without any hard evidence. Still the story is interesting and worth reading the 3rd chapter.

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