All Comments on '1993: Somalia Confidential'

This complex story had many elements and moods. It would have been an excellent tale, even without the sexual content.

The sex, when it occurred, was well written, and offered up some nice heat, even if parts of it will be a bit much for some tastes.

The author writes quite well, even if working in, what is clearly not, his native language.

Overall, this was a good story, well told, and including some hot sex. Nice work!

Great story. Well told despite the grammatical errors. These just added to story's sincerity. Interesting to hear a European soldier's view of the war in Somalia as opposed to an American. Cheers Ali Ahmad - Australia

OK, there is some obvious literary license as acknowledged by the author, but it is a story with an essential honesty to it. As noted in an earlier comment, it is simply a good story for non-sexual reasons but the sex was obviously an important part of what happened. Read it for the insights and enjoy the erotica as well!

of context,

sociology

and of course -

sex!

I loved and i cried when i heard about Lisa how did your test come out were you clean? gggsss1962 you should get yourself a editor to check your spelling i spotted a bunch of mispelled words but other wise i will give you a 100points i remember that war i saw it on the news i cried for you guys god bless you guys please write more stories i loved your stories.by the way how is lisa is she still alive ?

Pat Murray

Atlanta,Ga.

Awesome story. I think my cock is totally empty now. That was hot.

Well written with great plot but the indiscriminate use of sobbed/sobbing and inspired takes a bit away.

This is so good - as a story - that i will actually bookmark it!!

I thoroughly enjoy your stories, and I appreciate the effort you've gone to, to write them in English. Otherwise, few of us would be able to partake of the pleasure.

Yes, there are a number of errors an English - speaking editor could have corrected, but that hardly detracts from the great storytelling.

It will be a pleasure to read the rest of your submissions.