All Comments on '24 Hours a Slave Ch. 02'

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teehaa over 4 years ago

It would be far better if he wasn't a reckless asshole.

Seriously... why do so many of this story need to have a reckless asshole as a protagonist.

It takes so much away from the story...

Unyielding, strict, is one thing... emotionless asshole another...

Anonymousover 4 years ago

Love this, couldn't stop reading without starting to touch myself...very sexy!

Done something similar with a remote toy while shopping for sexy underwear and sexy toys...she got tied up on display and spanked with the whip she choosed.

FudgeBunny over 3 years ago

Brilliant

This is really well written. Please update soon.

Anonymousover 2 years ago

please update

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Here's the rundown: My early DDLG stuff is well inspired but (in my opinion and hey I'm my worst critic) I feel that I've definitely grown as a creative writer since then. Bottom line: don't expect high quality writing from my earlier works (also this is a free erotica website...

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