by entirelybs
"THE END"
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Wow, you're really sticking to make them three monogamous couples. No having the moms fuck the other sons, no girl/girl from the moms. Interesting.
at least the moms were smart enough and not swinging around.. 4/5 liked part 3 the most.. but didn't like all the sons..
Interesting that is Ch 1 the author mentions that Suzi's divorce has just been finalized. There is no mention of husband/fathers in Ch 2 & 3. Where are they?
Just 3 more stories of american youth doing what we suspected all along, lusting after their mothers, strange how 3 virgins turn out to be the greatest lovers on the planet when previously all they could was piss through it. With half the american male population in therapy it shouldn't be a suprise
I gave the series a 4/5…you REALLY need to get an editor to comb through your work. “Grinded” isn’t a proper word…and you use it a LOT. Also, you’ve mixed up his/her in some situations…and it detracts from the enjoyment of the story line.
Keep writing….I too wish there had been at least a 4th chapter where they all meet up.
Good series, hot and sensual. But we NEED a squel for this one, like what happened after?