All Comments on '30 Days of Sex - Day 02'

Your writing style is spunky and vivacious and I feel that your characters are real people. I do believe you could "tease yourself" by taking your time with scenes like these, a little "getting to know you", a little show and tell, maybe more curiosity about each others' bods, how their parallel orgasms lift, their differences in style and timing. See, there's lots to play with there, and I feel you could do it very well.

Shomokin