All Comments on '30 Days of Sex - Day 03 Pt. 01'

I read the three you've written so far & I'm really sorry, but you're an awful writer. This reads like some teenage jerkoff fantasy. The prose is grammatically awful & there's no depth to your characters. I hate being this negative but when you don't even bother to proofread your stuff it is obvious you don't give a rat's ass about writing quality stuff.

I try my best. :/