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RedHairedandFriendlyRedHairedandFriendlyover 18 years ago
Speechless

I started reading this and wondered where it was going. The description of the things the character saw are very richly detailed. You hear of "addicts" experiencing such horrible hallucinations. You have described something with such vivid words and emotions, that though I didn't want to continue the visualization of the story, it pulled at me to see it through the end. I'm not a horror fan, never have been... amazing read. Wow... RH&F

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
I'm Speachless

As disturbing and wrong as that story would be to a normal person, I found it absolutely spellbinding. When he was doing his thing on the bed in the end, I came with him. That was with no stimulation other than the story! I never touched myself. I'm anxious to read more of your work. Great Job!!!

cryingjc33cryingjc33over 17 years ago
nice

your story is very well written and surprisingly enjoyable..lol...im not usually into sick necrologue type stories but i really like this....

SadieRoseSadieRoseabout 16 years ago
I have to say that this story is WRONG on so many

...levels but written with such astonishing junk-fuelled clarity that it won't let you go. As I was reading it reminded me of the excellent works of William Burroughs and a little bit of Jeff Noon too. The subject matter should rightly repel but your narrator has an almost winsome quality that pulled me through to the end and actually made me concerned for what would happen to him next. Fucking astonishing stuff!

DstepDstepabout 14 years ago
Digusting

Disturbing and a bit on the disgusting side, all the things needed for an entertaining bit of horror

RSThomas42RSThomas429 months ago

This was visceral. As someone who has struggled with addiction, it hit close to home too. Really well done bit of psychosexual horror.

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