All Comments on '34 Minutes Ch. 05'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
*****

Five.

ariesgirlariesgirlalmost 11 years ago

Nicole is an idiot and Justin is one too for thinking she was going to leave Tony's cheating ass. Tony will screw up again then she will go running to Justin. Justin should step away from both of their bull.

Black_Dragon_PrincessBlack_Dragon_Princessalmost 11 years ago
I'm with ariesgirl on this!

"I'm sorry, baby. Here's some earrings." Fuck that shit! Nicole needs to kick that lyin cheatin motherfucker to the curb and get with Justin one hundred!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
sad

Nicole is stupid I know to many girls like her they act like these piece of shit dudes are the only ones who will ever want them and they don't get that a tiger don't change his stripes. Nicole will either hit rock bottom and cut her hair off or tony will dumped her then she'll really feel like shit

emj417emj417almost 11 years ago
great writing

Simple Nicole should run by the free clinic on her way back to Tony--wouldn't hurt J. to get checked out, too. Hopefully, he will find someone else. I mean this girl is about as trifling as Tony, if she has sex with him again.

HoneycaramelbitsHoneycaramelbitsalmost 11 years ago
Hmm

It is really hard to root for Nicole when she is this stupid. What Justin should have done is kissed her while backing her to the front door and shut it in her face. Because Tony is 'honest' I use that word loosely she stays with him? As if being 'honest' means anything to him. If he was truly honest and wanted her HE would have went to her the previous night instead of continuing on his 'adventure' and sending his friend to babysit her. Justin could do better and I can bet with his personality and skills he could find a sister with her sh*t together.

IronDragonIronDragonalmost 11 years ago

Something tells me this tale is far from over. I could see Tony doing it again, and that be the final straw for Justin AND Nicole. Tony is a douchebag, and Justin knows it. Nicole should know it too, and yet she still went back to him! The rest of my comment would mirror Black_Dragon_Princess's comment. She was PISSED OFF when she read it this morning before work! She looked at me and told me that if I ever cheated on her, She was going to make Lorena Bobbitt look sane. @.@

I love my lady. :)

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
Unsympathetic to Nicole's plight

Nicole is stupid. She's staying with Tony because they have history?! Yeah, a history him taking advantage of her. Plus, if it has been years, why the heck aren't they engaged or married? She's wasting her precious time and putting herself at risk of getting STDs staying with that trifling Tony. She needs to wake up. How has he been good to her? I could see if Tony was a great guy with a terrible weakness for the ladies. Most men that stray will at least uphold their other responsibilities to their girlfriends/wives. Tony disappears and is irresponsible (I.e. not picking Nicole up from the airport). He does not care about Nicole. He feels no guilt or remorse about cheating on her. No way, no how would I put up with that.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
Stupid, stupid, stupid..

Nicole is a plum fool. This dude has been cheating on her and finally admits to doing so multiple times with multiple women and that's OK to just take him back? So if he keeps cheating on her and simply tells her he's doing so she'll be ok with that? Typical woman who has no self-respect and therefore does not command it from her man. Sad. Justin needs to just forget about her and go deal with a woman who acts like a woman and not a fool!

DnaebugsDnaebugsalmost 11 years ago

Please let Nicole get her face busted and let Justin get with her friend and be happy. Still this is a great story and so worth the read

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
oh why why

You should be smarter than this nicky sweetheart.... But I understand second chances

mimi186mimi186almost 11 years ago
Angering me!

You could have fine as hell sweet perfect Justin what the fuck are you doing Nicole! Get a clue!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
Great story

Hope it doesn't take a few more years to finish it, awesome story so far

voluptuous_vvoluptuous_valmost 11 years ago

I love how the story flows. Justin is the bomb.com and Nicole has to realize that she's done way to much time in Tony relationship jail. I hope Tony does get himself together though.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
PLEASE CONTINUE!!!!

I love the way this is going!! Its awesome.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
please

PLEASE CONTINUE IT'S BEEN 2 MONTHS JUST NOW READING IT , BUT CONTINUE PLEASE .

roseloveroseloveover 10 years ago
AHHHHHHHH

NOOO. I NEED TO NO WHAT HAPPENS NEXT. PLZZZZ wow i fall in lov with ur story from the first ch. Lol.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
MORE

I love this story please write more:)

chocolatesistachocolatesistaover 10 years ago
Please

I'm in shock you need to finish, I love this story and the characters

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Dear God!

This story, book, idk what to call it. But its really, really truthfully amazing!! Please, Please write some more, I would love to see what happens!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
more

I can't wait for more. This is a fucking awesome story!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
I can't give this last one a star yet..

Cause I'm still trying to wrap my head around her ignorance.. So the dude she has been around for a minute cheats on her almost everyday, but she would rather be with HIM than with his best friend. If she is so scared of getting hurt she should be Rollin solo dolo instead of running back to Mr. Wacked game a.k.a her boyfriend... He isn't even smooth with his lies .I'm disgusted, But on the other hand your stories are on point thank you for sharing

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago

Please Finish this story ‼️‼️

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago

please finish amazing story

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Awesome

You're a great story teller! My God!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
So

What happens?

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago

Please continue!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
What's Next?

Please, please continue. I never send comments, but this is good!E

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago

Update please

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
No name

Anomynous why not give yourself a name? 🤔

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Chapter 6

Please hurry and write the next chapter. I'm curious about what will happen next.

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