All Comments on '$400 to Fuck Your Wife'

HOT!!!!

This was very erotic, especially the sequence where you described her undressing with instructions. You could have had her undress you and her reaction to your hardening cock. Some editing and proof reading would eliminate the mistakes. Very nice start, keep it coming.

That was good! Please keep going.

Nice premise.

Good buildup.

Nice preliminary sexual involvement/contact.

But then it's BAM! Cock into pussy. No preliminaries.

Needed much more in the way of him going step by step to excite her -- and get her ready.

Some dialog where he tells her what's going to happen next -- is that OK with her?

Maybe 'forcing' her to do things to him.

Lacks many too many details.

Three stars.

Chapter 2

After a few weeks she'll begin to tell her sissy wimp cuck husband John to stay home. Then she will begin complaining about everything he does or doesn't do. Then she'll take over the money and make him do everything around the house. Finally, after he lets the cheating skank slut bully him into submission, she'll just leave him for Peter. She'll think she can push Peter around too but the will go badly for her. The first time she spouts off at him, he'll take her over his lap and make sure she understands who is running the house. She won't be able to sit for a couple days but eventually she will come to love his discipline and firm hand. She'll act up just so he spanks her before he fucks her. She will have 4 kids with him and John won't even be a distant memory.

Interesting storyline.

I enjoyed this tale ... is there more?

Well done! A very erotic start.

That's a Great Start! My wife and I swapped with another couple and her name was Mary. OMG! Like being in

a different world when we played! Thanks for reminding me how much fun SEX can be.

Intensely erotic 🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥

Hot DAMN!