All Comments on '48 Hours on Blue Bayou Pt. 08: Julie'

You're a great writer but I feel like this story is misplaced. I read non/con because I want to feel the angst of a victim and watch them rise above despair. Julie is way too eager to please someone who just ripped her from her life and enslaved her. It doesn't feel realistic to me, I think it would fit better in BDSM at this point.

Although Julie seems to accept her slavery (is there an alternative? - Things can always be worse!) she approaches her situation with so much sarcasm, that there can be no question that she doesn't exactly embrace her fate. You write quite well and I do love your story.

Very boring .... and not only.

for a site of this kind

Once again I wanted to compliment your writing. I am enjoying the story so much. The detail regarding Julies clothes and the food they are eating is really good. Thank you.