by Carole99
it seems a bit anticlimactic for him to just let the slaves go, say they're free, and for them to just accept it so smoothly. I have been waiting for the slavers to suffer for their crimes for a very long time, and it seems like it's just glossed over in the end...
Really glad to see this new chapter. Again the prose is solid with a good flow, and it's nice to see the cast again, with some decent conclusions to their arcs. At times it feels a tad rushed, for example I half expected to see Harry in Naimh's ending arc, but it was still very sweet which I approve of.
Good luck with Julie's ending, keep up the great work ^_^
5/5 stars
Thank you so much for this chapter .... it was sooooooooo romantic. I can't wait for Julie's ending. Thanks for giving this great story such a good ending.
I loved all 50 parts of this story and, especially, how things ended up for Niamh and Martin. I cannot wait for the end of Julie's story. I can only hope that it is as happy. I cannot wait to read it.