48 Hours on Blue Bayou Pt. 50: Niamh

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Niamh was stunned. "Holy cow," she cried, "whose place is this?"

"Ours."

Authors' End Note: This Part completes the story of how Niamh was enslaved, served her Master in Hong Kong, and grew in her slavery to captivate that Master, eventually winning both her freedom and a Partner for life.

We hope to publish the next Part, with details of Julie's future, in the near future.

All our co-authors appreciate the attention you Dear Readers have given our efforts, especially the Comments you have sent us. Each Comment has showed your understanding of our characters (some of whom have, at least for a time, taken over our narrative!) and your appreciation of our work.

Carole99, J Spe, and Taliesin1

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AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
What a wonderful story

I loved all 50 parts of this story and, especially, how things ended up for Niamh and Martin. I cannot wait for the end of Julie's story. I can only hope that it is as happy. I cannot wait to read it.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Loved It ........ And then some

Thank you so much for this chapter .... it was sooooooooo romantic. I can't wait for Julie's ending. Thanks for giving this great story such a good ending.

JpmaggersJpmaggersabout 4 years ago
A Nice End

Really glad to see this new chapter. Again the prose is solid with a good flow, and it's nice to see the cast again, with some decent conclusions to their arcs. At times it feels a tad rushed, for example I half expected to see Harry in Naimh's ending arc, but it was still very sweet which I approve of.

Good luck with Julie's ending, keep up the great work ^_^

5/5 stars

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
hmmm

it seems a bit anticlimactic for him to just let the slaves go, say they're free, and for them to just accept it so smoothly. I have been waiting for the slavers to suffer for their crimes for a very long time, and it seems like it's just glossed over in the end...

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